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Friday, 11 April 2014

story writing

WOW! I see goldfish that are blue. "are we there yet" NO when bob and the mouse got to England they bought a house there. it was an old house but they needed somewhere to stay. the floorboards,were crecky and dusty,like mouldy cheese.

My goal was sentence structure
I have used one at the end it was the floorboards,were crecky and dusty,like mouldy cheese.
i did this because it goes with my story.

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