Friday, 20 June 2014

Fair go

Baby Carriers
A business have been selling fake baby carriers to gain money they have been putting babies in danger because the buckle comes apart easily (and babies might fall out).The real one has a buckle that doesn't come apart(so the babies won’t fall out). The consumer(customer) has been depositing their money for them. They are fake clearly people will not buy them anymore because they are not real you buy them off a website so that is a way to send fake goods. The consumers did not know that they were fake they thought they were real!

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I believe I am at relational because i don't put the punctuation in the right place.
My next step is to put the punctuation in the right place.

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